I thought including timings in the narrative made it look professional and accurate. Timings would be recorded with a cell phone? I couldn't imagine how shoppers would have been so accurate in the old days with a stop watch or a wrist watch. Lol. It's like servers are the victims of technology, poor things.
All writers should remember the importance of white space.
Edited 2 time(s). Last edit at 04/25/2017 08:43AM by Robin2.